by Tech. Sgt. Dan Heaton
127th Wing Public Affairs
12/8/2014 - SELFRIDGE AIR NATIONAL GUARD BASE, Mich. -- About
two dozen Air National Guard Airmen are better able to tell the story
of America's Airmen thanks to a new writing mentorship program.
The course, Understanding Air National Guard News Writing - and More,
was launched in early 2014 and relies on a long-distance mentorship
program to allow Airmen in the Public Affairs career field to hone their
skills as writers and journalists.
The program has already paid dividends, according to one graduate.
Senior Airman Elise Stout of the 126th Air Refueling Wing in Illinois wrote a news story in July that highlighted the contributions that Illinois Guardsmen make to U.S. Strategic Command.
"That article was about how we support the nuclear deterrent mission,
one of the main things we do to defend the nation," Stout said. "The
story went Air Force-wide and shows how the Guard supports the Air Force
mission on a daily basis.
"I could see the big difference in that story, writing it as a
journalist rather than the essay-style writing I do in my school
writing," said Stout, who is also a student at the University of
Illinois.
Stout, who has been in the Air National Guard for about three years, was
among the last Public Affairs Airmen trained solely as a photographer,
rather than as a photojournalist. Several years ago, the Air Force
consolidated the photographer and public affairs specialist career
fields, meaning writers were now photographers and photographers were
now writers. While the initial training for new Airmen now includes both
skills, sending all those Airmen who were already on the job back to
the basic school was simply a logistical impossibility.
That presented a big challenge to Airmen like Senior Master Sgt. Preston
Chasteen of Oklahoma's 138th Fighter Wing. He'd been a photographer
since he first enlisted in the mid-1980s.
"I embraced the transition into the public affairs community, but I
needed to gain a new tool in my tool box," Chasteen said. "Writing an
Air Force news article is different than what you learn in Composition
in a college class."
Hearing feedback from the field, public affairs leaders at National
Guard Bureau in Washington and the ANG's I.G. Brown Training and
Education Center in Tennessee started looking for a solution.
"Good, experienced news writers exist in the Air National Guard, but
they are scattered at the various wings," said Master Sgt. Mike Smith,
the principle architect of the writing class. "That left a lot of wings
where they had some excellent photographers who were now being called on
to be writers, but they had no training, they had no mentor on site,"
Smith said. "What we needed was a plan to put the mentors and the
trainees together, despite the distances."
Smith's program spotlights five experienced writers from around the ANG
and offers the tips, tricks and techniques from their collected
experiences. The five-month program is built around a series of
assignments given to the student writers to tackle during their monthly
Unit Training Assembly with their home unit. The assigned stories are
then edited by Smith, commented on by the mentors, and returned to the
student. All of the editing is done by e-mail, with the periodic phone
call when necessary. One of the benefits of the class is that the
students are writing local stories about local operations, which, after
the editing process, are then available for local publication - or
beyond, as was the case for Stout's article.
Twelve students completed the course in early 2014. A second rotation recently began with 10 more students.
"I give the articles a hard edit. They come back with a lot of red marks
on them, but our students are starving for this level of feedback. Our
true mentors don't just tell us how great we are," Smith said.
Among the biggest challenges for the Guard journalists who are serving
with their unit generally one weekend a month, is finding the stories
and then carving out the time to get the story turned in.
Master Sgt. Tom Kielbasa, a photojournalist at Florida Joint Forces
Headquarters, first learned his trade working as a newspaper reporter.
Now, he's serving as one of the mentors in the class.
"At a daily paper, you need to have a story a day," Kielbasa said. "To
find the news, you just start talking to people. Everybody has a story,
especially on drill weekend."
Kielbasa said the course is also intended to force the journalist to get the story finished in a timely manner.
"Today's news cycle moves quickly," he said. "We have to operate at that same speed if we want to contribute to the discussion."
Smith said he intends to bring in additional mentors and to continue to
offer the course on a twice-a-year schedule in the future. Interested
Airmen or public affairs supervisors can contact TEC for information on
participating in the next class cycle, scheduled to begin approximately
May 2015.
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